Last English Paper

What do people think I should get for a grade when I have only been here for a quarter of the year?  I think that I should get a B+/ A- for a grade.  I am always participating in discussions, galley walks, writing in journals and other things as well.  My progress is good because my writing is better and I am not making as many mistakes.  My performance isn’t always the greatest.  I am writing ok at times and when I try to fix it, it just becomes worst.  During the year I have learned how to write better, understand things easier, and comprehend things better than before.  I deserve an A- because I am hardworking and it will help boost my grade average up.

You said that I deserve a B/ B+.  You say that I do not share enough during the writings and other things that we do in class.  Also, because some things were late and the grade was lower than before.  So what if my writing isn’t always the best but I am always trying to fix it and make it better so that can get an A.  I really want to have a better grade and I am always working for it.

I am hardworking and I try to go above and beyond in things that we do.  I am always trying to fix my writing and make it better so that I can get a better grade.  I always participate in most of the things we do in class.  Also, I try to make my performance and progress better.  I always trying to make everything that I do better because not only will I get a better grade I will start to do more and more as I write.  I am trying to get an A- in your class.

Getting an A- will help boost my grade average up.  Usually I have an A’s in English and I am trying to get it in your class.  I really want to have an A in your class but I somehow end up being just short of it.  I am always trying to make up that short part from an A but every time I try to it just get farther and farther away.   I am always working hard to get an A but can’t get one.  I really want an A and will work even harder next time to get one.

I deserve an A- because I am hardworking and I need it to help boost my grade average up.  I am always trying to get A’s in every class.  I have good participation, progress, and a descent performance on all the things that we do in class.  I want to get an A and I will continue to work hard for it but I need it stop going farther away and if that happens then I will write better than before.   I really deserve an A- for all the catching up that I had to do in your class and all my other classes as well.  I deserve an A- because I will not only work hard for it but  I will continue to make my participation, progress, and performance better and better than it was when I started English here at ONW. 

villanelle

I want to become a professional soccer player.
I need to make that dream come true.
Don't become the next original gangster.

With this dream I just become a chaser.
I want to make this dream anew.
I want to become a professional soccer player.

If this dream starts to die it will just get darker.
If it starts to die don't give up hope.
Don't become the next original gangster.

Don't worry if you don't give up hope your not a goner.
You will keep hoping and you'll climb the slope.
I want to become a professional soccer player.

Some people think that this goal is making you a dreamer.
Don't worry about them you'll be fine just remember don't grope.
Don't become the next original gangster.

Remeber to keep the goal alive and just think higher.
Just keep your dream in your scope.
I want to become a professional soccer player.
Don't become the next original gangster.

sonnet

I love to play soccer daily, even during the night.
You have to kick the ball into the net.
You need to kick the right or you'll lose sight.
If you miss the net you will be in debt.
Soccer is a reall big sport all around the world.
People crowd around just to see a game. 
The crowd's favorite team wants to get the ball hurled.
If a team does not score durong the game thet are the same.
The World Cup is a very big thing to win.
The winning team gets to loved by their country.
If a team does not score it is a sin.
During a intense game it can be crazy.
I love to play soccer all the time.
I even play it in my bedtime.

If I were Sam Fisher I would do the same thing.  I would go after the people who killed my brother with a disease.  I would find them question them for answers about the things that are happen and what happened to him.  Also, I would go follow his foot steps and find out what was going on and why he ended up dead for it.  I would make sure to stop what ever is going to happen during the time that I would be investigating to find out whats going on and how to stop it.

I'm surprised that the North Koreans were helping during the book. The North Koreans are a communist country and why would they be helping the people that they are helping.  What was the point of them helping and what is in it for them.  North Koreans do not help a lot but in this book they did.  At the end I found out what it was all for and why they were helping the people in Kyrgyzstan.

I noticed that during the book Sam gets to travel the world trying to solve what happened.  He goes to San Francso, North Korea, South Africa, Kyrgyzstan, Canada, and a town called Little Bicsek.  When he goes to all these places they are for different reasons.  In San Francso for training.  To Canada to find his brother's work place and to talk to a very powerful man.  In Litte Bicsek to see a friend is there and find so information about a connection.  To North Korea to talk to a spy that is working for the wrong side.  In South Africa to find so coorinadates that his brother left.  In Kyrgyzstan to stop what his brother found could destroy the oil supply in the Earth.

I wonder what would have happened if Sam had not been able to stop it.  I think the world wouldn't be able to survive without oil because it powers most of the thinks that we are using today.  The world would end up paying the North Koreans money to get to the oil supply that had found.  The entire world would go broke paying money to the North Koreans and would not survive when that oil supply was gone.

I realized that without oil the world would have been chaos.  They would all be paying for oil or they would have to find another way to keep the world power supply going.  They would run out of money first and then they would have to find a new way to power all the modern things that we use today.  It would be very hard on everyone.  The world would be mad and we would not be able to survive without a type of power source.  So I am glad that Sam was able to stop this from happening.

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