Last English Paper

What do people think I should get for a grade when I have only been here for a quarter of the year?  I think that I should get a B+/ A- for a grade.  I am always participating in discussions, galley walks, writing in journals and other things as well.  My progress is good because my writing is better and I am not making as many mistakes.  My performance isn’t always the greatest.  I am writing ok at times and when I try to fix it, it just becomes worst.  During the year I have learned how to write better, understand things easier, and comprehend things better than before.  I deserve an A- because I am hardworking and it will help boost my grade average up.

You said that I deserve a B/ B+.  You say that I do not share enough during the writings and other things that we do in class.  Also, because some things were late and the grade was lower than before.  So what if my writing isn’t always the best but I am always trying to fix it and make it better so that can get an A.  I really want to have a better grade and I am always working for it.

I am hardworking and I try to go above and beyond in things that we do.  I am always trying to fix my writing and make it better so that I can get a better grade.  I always participate in most of the things we do in class.  Also, I try to make my performance and progress better.  I always trying to make everything that I do better because not only will I get a better grade I will start to do more and more as I write.  I am trying to get an A- in your class.

Getting an A- will help boost my grade average up.  Usually I have an A’s in English and I am trying to get it in your class.  I really want to have an A in your class but I somehow end up being just short of it.  I am always trying to make up that short part from an A but every time I try to it just get farther and farther away.   I am always working hard to get an A but can’t get one.  I really want an A and will work even harder next time to get one.

I deserve an A- because I am hardworking and I need it to help boost my grade average up.  I am always trying to get A’s in every class.  I have good participation, progress, and a descent performance on all the things that we do in class.  I want to get an A and I will continue to work hard for it but I need it stop going farther away and if that happens then I will write better than before.   I really deserve an A- for all the catching up that I had to do in your class and all my other classes as well.  I deserve an A- because I will not only work hard for it but  I will continue to make my participation, progress, and performance better and better than it was when I started English here at ONW.